PEER REVIEW #2- Karl Otto [QUARTERS vs. TRIMESTER]
The first sentence is not a long sentence explaining exactly what the 5 Ws and H are. It does a nice job of leading and introducing the topic but still needs to answer some questions that were left unanswered. I think that the paper will be really interesting once the interviews are put in, and the paper has a little bit more stucture. But all in all I think it’s a good start :)